Thursday, November 5, 2009

Topic Sentences

1.On Saturdays I enjoy watching several cartoons.
2.At JIS students follow three rules.
3.Sixth graders went on two field trips this year.
4.When I go shopping at the mall, I always buy a new item of clothing from one of my four favorite stores.
5.The book Bloomability describes the many adventures of Dinnie.
6.I enjoy four different computers games.
7.Tourists travelling to Indonesia will want to visit a number of important places.
8.We will learn several important skills in grade six this year.
9.Madness day is fun, three really exciting events happened.
10.Rocks are formed three different ways.
1. Last summer holiday was fun we spent six days in Bogor.
2. I watched two movies last night it was awesome.
3. I made a Halloween party at home with my friends and cousins I invited five people.
4. Today I have six homework today.
5. On the fourteenth of August our principal gave us a three days of holiday.

1 comment:

  1. Nadia,

    Good work.

    In sentence 1 only cartoons needs to be bolded.
    In sentence 2 only rules needs to be bolded.
    In sentence 3 only field trips needs to be bolded.
    In sentence 4 either shopping or favorite stores need to be bolded, not both.
    In sentence 6 only computer games needs to be bolded.
    In sentence 9 only events needs to be bolded.


    In your own sentences, in number 3, I think Halloween party needs to be bolded.

    Ms Schwarzkopf

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